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| "I'm SO sorry!" 1st draft |
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| "I'm SO sorry!" final draft |
Here are two renderings of the same scene. The chapter this scene originates has already been drafted.
Here,
Stacey Hankin is looking for her friend, 'Slash', who, after being
left for dead, the young woman found help for him.
When
he's mostly recovered, he disappears, leaving his forwarding address
with their mutual new friend.
Stacey
goes looking for him, and finds him recovering in his family house.
However,
when she is led to him, he's sleeping and wakes up shirtless. Stacey
is embarrassed enough to quickly turn away, much to Gina Castellano's
amusement.
Did
more research in order to render the clothing on both women. Also, by
Stacey's dress, it changes the day the scene originally took place.
Now, I may make changes not only to the next draft, but also within
the story. *Sigh* The life of a writer/artist.
