Showing posts with label fiction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label fiction. Show all posts

Thursday, November 1, 2018

#BW = Hashtag Black Women

I don't know about you, but I'm lovin' all these new stories when otherworldly beings fall in love with wonderfully Black women protagonists! 

Some examples (and please, that means READ THEM. They're GOOOOD): Talia Hibbert's Mating with the Huntress (Novel-BW/Werewolf) 

Plastic Bottru's Oh My Intern (Webtoon-BW/Demon)

As well as my own take (BW/Alien)

We just weren't the romantic interests in most genres and media, much less when the story is speculative-fiction. If our own kind didn't want us, neither did it seem the men/women from out of myth and space, either.😒 

Wednesday, July 12, 2017

Life is becoming stranger than fiction

More political strife when people are now mentioning the White House TV drama being ordinary and plausible.

House of Cards
Mad Men
Moby Dick
And comic book villains
Mortal Kombat
The modern-day Mafia
Red Mafya (what Russian organized crime is called)
La Costra Nostra
The Godfather
The Twilight Zone
The Eye of Sauron (from the Lord of the Rings)

Absolutely ridiculous that some screwed up people still think this is all normal. And I don't digress...

Monday, March 20, 2017

Somebody's Become A Bad Guy

Someone's becoming a villain.

A character who I thought would be a help to my main protagonists is frightfully becoming an antagonist. The more scenes with his best friend, my male main character, he is showing another side that no one who knows him is especially liking.

The more my hero gets close to my shero/heroine, the more antagonistic this 'friend' becomes!

Also, the schoolmate friend who I thought would simply be a weak secondary character is actually getting stronger the more he interacts with my protags as well as with other characters. He is becoming my main couple's 'cheerleader' and doing his best to support them both emotionally, not just in obvious material means.

These writerly revelations has changed several chapters and relationships as well as the tone of the story in a dynamic way. Because of such revelatory mutations, I don't have to rely on several of my journal notes. I can simply write blindly and freely.

More to come...

Saturday, October 27, 2012

The Art of Plugging Away - A side note

I was told, in early writing exercises, that my voice was authentic.
Or, when I write my male gangsters, and how other male protagonists behave, there have been, so far, little to no complaints from the men who read my fiction.
Rarely have I changed a character's race, though the ethnicity proved trickier to determine. As the story progressed, the ethnicity would become resolved.

Saturday, June 30, 2012

Writing Multicultural...Part 5

Writing 'multicultural' sounds like a catchphrase, for which I HATE catchphrases... I feel as if we're dumbing human wisdom down to bite-size morsels.

To 'show' multiculturalism in fiction can be for a sub-culture or segment of a population not considered 'mainstream'.

Case in point:

I've attended my share of writing seminars, courses, and workshops.

One such was a woman's fiction workshop, with the acrimonious name "Chick Lit".
Yes, I felt offended, and it also reminded me of the candies I didn't really like when the family lived in New York.

Yet, in this week-long workshop, the two instructors were professional writers; co-authors to several series about the lives and dramas in Black families and among Black women friends.

Both women were witty, humorous, and gave fluid instruction.

In one exercise, everyone in the classroom had to construct a character sketch, a paragraph describing one's female protagonist. Her dominating feature, whether it be a habit, physical - too easy! - , or the sound/tone of her voice.
I had a character already, one from my many attempts over the years.
She lived in a post-modern, Gothic-theme society, the literary industry now calls it steampunk, but I think the genre wasn't known except among its enthusiasts, and besides, I just wanted to write about a Gothic character.

As a teen, I learned about gothic people and their lifestyle. I was fascinated by their refusal to dress as the mainstream, preferring to wear the fashions of the Victorian and Edwardian eras.

(There is even a Japanese version of goths called Gothic Lolitas, girls and women, no matter their age, who dress as living French dolls of the 1900s! More about these endearing women and girls in another post)

My protagonist's world had horse carriages competing with automobiles, but people carried cellphones! There were also other 20th - 21th century conveniences, such as computers.

However, given the stereotypical views of mainstream society believing Goths were all death-obsessed, in this story, death by suicide and heavily-contracted murders were permissible, as long as done within the law!

The wealthier citizens could even pay to be elaborately murdered!

And for more tongue-in-cheek, I gave my characters grim names, such as Simon Ominnous and Harradine Darkchapel, Mortimer and Quillraven.

My protagonist became Emmaline Deathstone, and though she came from wealth, had joined the police force as a young woman, and was now, at the time of my story, a middle-age detective, or commissioner, as they call them in different ways in Europe.

After sketches were approved, we had to then write a single scene showcasing all that was on the character sketch, without seeming too obvious.

My scene took place during a next-day investigation. A murder may have taken place in a wealthy suburb, yet, none of the denizens heard anything beyond a scream.

I borrowed descriptive patterns from U.S. cop shows, and my characters' speech from London... during Sherlock Holmes' era.

Once finished, the instructors pointed to each of us to read aloud this scene.

As a class, we were pleased by each other's creations.
The few men had surprised themselves in formulating credible female characters!

A young woman, Latin teen, approached me, wore glasses as I, and mumbled how much she enjoyed hearing me read my story.

She then gave me the highest compliment: she asked if I had once been a goth!

I told her no, but that I had always admired the sub-culture, and for my story, had researched online resources pertaining to Goths and Gothic living: where they worked, what were their hobbies, what they did for fun, and how they raised their families - they are VERY family-oriented, and from personal observations, often more faithful to their partners and spouses than those of 'mainstream' society!

After the workshop week ended, I, and that younger classmate, kept in touch on and off, and I must admit, I still chat with this friend online!
She is raising a family, has moved to other interests, and no longer writes, but stated she was pleased I kept up writing.

To summarize, I wrote this character out of a genuine enthusiasm and deep interest for a people often maligned and misunderstood by the general populace.
Yet, in my few interactions with Goths, I found very warm, highly literate, and old-fashioned, family-oriented folks.

My challenge to you, fellow writers, and to anyone who reads this blog, that couple with their children? The father's hair may be blue, the mother may have dyed hers a deep purple and wears black lace, and the children happen to wear metal spikes, Go Talk To Them!

You may be surprised. I found more 'normal' there than around so-called 'regular' persons!
You may also happen to be a Goth reading this post!

**I will upload the class assignment I mentioned on another day. When I do, let me know what you think!

Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Writing Multicultural...Part 4

Three posts ago, I mentioned that manuscript.

Remember? The one I submitted in desperation?

As months went by, dreary thoughts plagued me. Perhaps, in the vacuum of my English and Creative Writing instructors' praises, and a few classmates' encouragement, I really didn't have what it took to be a story writer.

I went on to other projects. I forget about the story.

Months went by, and I received an email.

From an editor!

With my story title in its subject line and a question if I was the author.

The editor had lost some contact information, and so, forgot where the submission originated.
I read the message, realized it WAS mine, and quickly replied.

I learned, through email correspondence, he was also the magazine's co-founder.

The ball rolled quickly afterwards.

Edits back and forth. In this general theme publication, he made two changes: in my earlier draft, have the characters wearing 'skivvies', and to describe the matchmakers' processes.

He explained: many readers may not be familiar with Chinese culture, and so, it would be better if I were more specific with the matchmaking!

Oh, did I forget to mention, the editor, by reading his name, turned out to be Chinese-American?
I nearly fell from my chair.

Here was a story taking place in my fantasy world of upright felines, with cultures and beliefs created from a decade's worth of research, and yet, my FIRST editor took something from it, saw within the story his background, and explained to a nascent writer how to improve its narrative.

No, I'm not making this up. This happened.

Is it a coincidence? I don't believe in it. I believe there is a rhyme and reason to many things.
For instance, there is something to be said about storytelling, that many writers strive for. We would rather be known for telling a good tale rather than how well we do the grammatical mechanics.

Yet, while learning and TRYING to perfect the mechanics of crafting a tale, we can get to the heart of the work, and, within its characters' lives, touch something in the reader.

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NOTE: It's now official! I am a WikiFur entry! I tweeted this, but here is the link.
Carmen K. Welsh Jr. - WikiFur, the furry encyclopedia

(Whoever wrote this perfected my own information I contributed to my writer's guild and on my official site. Scary. The person(s) wrote about me better than I did!)

Friday, June 15, 2012

Writing Multicultural...Part 3

Two posts ago, I discussed that before thinking multicultural, think of the individual first.

Now I'll discuss, through personal anecdotes and experiences, how I employed these techniques, and what were the results...

'Su Ling' was my first official attempt to get published. What I mean is, I made several half-hearted attempts... Why? Well, I had been given a green light in Creative Writing, instruction/encouragement from the few professors and instructors who believed in me.
In 1999, now out in the big, bad world, I did my market research. I submitted, prayed and crossed my fingers.
After several rejections from speculative fiction magazines, disheartened, and wondering how I thought I could write, worried that even if I returned to my art, would I make it?
I almost closed my eyes quickly,  picked and submitted to one publisher on my list.
And forgot about the manuscript...

Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Writing Multicultural...Part 2

In my last post, I made my disclaimer and introduction about writing multicultural fiction.
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Some writers express difficulty writing from a child's eye view.

Still others rely on cliches when they write about other cultures, other races, and other ethnic groups.

A character often begins in my mind's eye.
I started life as an artist, so gender, race, and body type comes first.

I see the character's height, hair color, and often how they may sound.
If I want to get more technical, actual measurements, the texture of their hair, the shape of their eyes, I figure out through exposition. Hand size and facial shape comes through with physical  characterization.

You may ask what does this have to do with writing multicultural characters?

Well, I often think about the people around me.
Culture may not come into play until after.
I have to know who this person is first. If I'm confusing anyone, sorry.

In a nutshell, to begin thinking multicultural, think about the individual FIRST.

This is why writerly advice often stresses that you write as much and as often on your Work-in-Progress.

Writers often put undue stress on ourselves.
We cannot know EVERYTHING about our WIP: plot, story, characters, style... But what we do know is that, through the process of writing, something is revealed.

Get to know your character through the relationship of writing.

Wednesday, June 6, 2012

Writing Multicultural...Part 1

Multicultural fiction is trending, and it's about time!

I recently tweeted a rant: that instead of teaching American History properly in this country, we devoted a month to most ethnic groups or different races. I find this lazy and self-indulgent.

Writers, we are often highly and widely read (not all reading material is 'well'), so it is nearly impossible to explain where we often find our research, our writing advice, and so forth.

On the topic of writing about folks who may not share your cultural backgrounds, I've found numerous articles over the years: some helpful. Some VERY helpful. Others...not helpful at all.

Some authors interviewed exclaim they had difficulty writing children convincingly.
Others, the difficulty lay in switching genders - some male authors said they had a trying time writing convincing women.
Some female authors, their male characters were their Achilles' heel...
One article, the writer couldn't figure out how to portray the elderly!

I know I don't have your answers.. I can only tell you what worked and appears to work for me.. With everything else, remember I mentioned being widely-read?
This also means being widely entertained.
I've been a foreign cinema fan as far back as Kindergarten. But it took some cheesy and some cliched stuff before I expanded my horizons.

This takes me to the first jumping-point.

1. Don't Knock the Martial-Art Film

Why? For some reason, our society views these films as 'chop-socky' nonsense hailing to days when many Occidentals thought all Oriental peoples wielded nunchaku, carried Sai blades, or katanas. And we once thought Asians and Asian-Americans were all black belts in a variety of martial disciplines.

Yes, these were stereotypes, and yes, stereotypes have a sneaky way of going from Funny to Downright Dangerous.
But, before you wonder where I'm going, I promise, unlike many martial-art movies, this has a happy ending.*

The more I watched these films, the more I became inundated with different Asian cultures, symbolisms, and history. Though I could not travel to these places, I was learning things.
I didn't know it at the time, but I credit these films for helping me into other genres in Asian cinema!

I still watch Hollywood films. I don't have a choice, I'm an American, and it is my film industry, and puts out the second-largest amounts of movies and films in the world!
(Sorry to those who thought Hollywood was the most prolific. It's not. It's just the most Profitable film industry. That prolificity goes to India's Bollywood)

Also, when viewing the Asian-American in contemporary Hollywood film, just how far have we come? Far. But not far enough.

Asians have contributed much to our American landscape, and still feature quite low in the pop culture and modern media.
We may want to knock the old time martial-art movies, but those films made many of their actors STARS!

When I began consuming foreign Asian media (books, movies, comics), the cultural references became familiar, the dialects a little easier to detect, the historical background a little lighter to digest.

Don't Dis(respect) the classic martial-art movies.


*Martial-art film buffs know what I mean

Writing Multicultural..Or writing about persons different from you

Dear Reader, the following topic will extend to several postings.

It deals with a wide and varied topic. I feel I can gather my thoughts by making each post bite-sized and easy to swallow and digest.
Also, Here There Be Anecdotes.

Remember, these are my opinions, what I have learned from personal experiences.

If I offend, or upset, it isn't intentional nor is that my motivation.

Race and ethnicity are a part of ALL of US, which goes to my first beef: what's up with the terms "Ethnic Food" or "Ethnic Fiction"? Or anything 'ethnic' tagged on?
So, European-Americans and other world-wide whites WEREN'T ethnic groups? (Sorry, alliteration was unintentional)

These are the silly and foolish tags we use indiscriminately because it's an 'In thing'. The 'Trendy' thing to do or say.

In case you miss a post, and want to return to tips, anecdote, suggestions, checklists, simply click on the following tag(s) under the post : multicultural, ethnicity.

I will also title the posts in Parts.
This will make it easier for me to categorize for you.

On to the postings...

Monday, December 27, 2010

'Invitation to World Literature' continued...Part 2

"1000 and 1 Nights", though many of the stories seem disjointed or meander to other characters and places, is held together by the frame of a single, intelligent and wise young woman who changes a tyrant to become a loving husband, father and ruler.

This brought to mine my own collection of short stories.
When 'Tabber the Red' was originally a novel, it couldn't work. I had many stylistic problems with it. Once I began to break it down into short stories is when the work soared and magazines began to publish them.

In a nutshell, 'Tabber the Red' is my tabby warrior who manages, through cunning, stealth, and an unusual intelligence not perceived among his particular clan group, to fix the world as he sees fit, to end the rival squabbles, the genocides, as well as bring peace to the tabby tribes that rule the Grassland Region.

Sometimes, the short stories revolve around him, or go beyond his timeline, touch the past and even into the future, so that Tabber, in just a few stories, his parents are the focus, or, his childhood is in focus. Later, the meeting of his wife, and soon, what events are affected by his children and grandchildren. 

The stories even will mention people in history on this world, other times, other breeds and other cultures. This is why I'm glad that I named my official website after him instead of after me.

TabbertheRed.com

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